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Students should be given money to buy their family/friends presents for X-Mas and their birthday. I think that this would be a very good thing to help bonding with family/students. And the act of It would make us feel good about ourselves and that others care enough about us as friends of family to put the thought and effort of finding a present for us. The money could be funraised and each student that qualifies for the money should get up to 100 dollars for their gift to someone. The fundraisers could consist of car washes in local lots in Escondido and sending fliers to people in the mail and asking for donations to this cause. Instead of just receiving gifts for Christmas, the students of SPA should be taught to give presents.